What set my reading Geiger counter off, though, was how he messed up his references to languages used by the "bad guys," and the American translators. One example, alone, suffices: The FBI SAIC in Cairo, who's assigned to the task force investigating the attack on the ship, speaks the local language in Egypt (and Yemen), which is Arabic. The female officer, the Delta translator, talks to him in Farsi. Whereon, he replies,"...From the way she talks she could have been born in Baghdad..." A heck of a praising comment, but off. Farsi is the language of Iran, not Iraq, although spoken in parts of Afghanistan, also. It is NOT the language of Yemen. And there was no reason to believe that the agent spoke Farsi.
There were other linguistic gaffs, and each one deterred from enjoyment of the book. I began to wonder whether a super market newspaper was his source of information.
I have read the author's book "One Shot, One Kill" and thought that it was quite good. Based on that, I thought that there would be some factual basis for this book and hopeful series. His research into al Qaeda and bin Laden are actually pretty good. Unfortunately, he falls into the trap of vilifying and degrading all Arabs within the book. This makes the "bad guys" so shallow as to be one dimensional at best.
The main character, Major Brandon Kragle, is not typical of officers within Delta or US Special Forces (although he is supposed to be both.) To say that this character is contrived would probably be true but does not go nearly far enough. Just let it stand that Kragle would not have made it through the psych eval for Delta let alone been able to stay in the unit.
Two more points that bring out the poor quality of this book. First, Kragles brother is "put" into Delta as an operator but apparently has not had to go through selection to get there. Sorry, but this just could not and would not happen. Second, the author takes a page our of "The Dirty Dozen" and uses rhymes for the aaault force. If this were not so ludicrous it might be amusing but it places the Delta operators in the absolute worse possible light.
The author may have 13 years in SF but I have to wonder if he was ever a member of an ODA? He certainly shows that he knows little about Delta or AFSOF.
Another reviewer stated that if "Delta Force fellows really are this stupid ...", well they aren't nor are they as incompetent as the author would have you believe in this book.